from A RETROSPECT
There has been so much scribbling about a new fashion in poetry, that
I may perhaps be pardoned this brief recapitulation and restrospect.
In the spring or early summer of
1912, "H.D.," Richard Aldington and myself decided that we were agreed
upon the three principles following:
1. Direct treatment of the "thing"
whether subjective or objective.
2. To use absolutely no word that
does not contribute to the presentation.
3. As regarding rhythm: to compose
in the sequence of the musical phrase, not in sequence of a metronome.
A FEW DON’TS
LANGUAGE
Use no superfluous word, no adjective
which does not reveal something.
Don’t use such an expression as "dim
lands of peace." It dulls the image. It mixes an abstraction with
the concrete. It comes from the writer’s not realizing that the natural
object is always the adequate symbol.
Go in fear of abstractions. Do not
retell in mediocre verse what has already been done in good prose. Do’t
think any intelligent person is going to be decieved when you try to shirk
all the difficulties of the unspeakably difficult art of good prose by
chopping your composition into line lengths. . . .
Be influenced by as many great artists
as you can, but have the decency either to acknowledge the debt outright,
or to try to conceal it.
Use either no ornament or good ornament.
Don’t imagine that a thing will "go"
in verse just because it’s too dull to go in prose.
When Shakespeare talks of the "Dawn
in russet mantle clad" he presents something which the painter does not
present. There is in this line of his nothing that one can call description;
he presents.
Consider the way of the scientists
rather than the way of an advertising agent for a new soap.
* This is for rhythm, his vocabulary must of course be found in his native tongue.
CREDO
Rhythm.—I believe in an "absolute
rhythm," a rhythm, that is, in poetry which corresponds exactly to the
emotion or shade of, emotion to be expressed. A man’s rhythm must be interpretative,
it will be, therefore, in the end, his own, uncounterfeiting, uncounterfeitable.
Symbols.—I believe that the
proper and perfect symbol is the.natural object, that if a man use "symbols"
he must so use them that their symbolic function does not obtrude; so that
a sense, andthe poetic quality of the passage, is not lost to those who
do not p understand the symbol as such, to whom, for instance, a hawk is
a hawk.
Technique.—I believe in technique
as the test of a man’s sincerity; in law when it is ascertainable; in the
trampling down of every convention that impedes or obscures the determination
of the law, or the precise rendering of the impulse.
Form.—I think there is a "fluid"
as well as a "solid" content, that some poems may have form as a tree has
form, some as water poured into a vase. That most symmetrical forms have
certain uses. That a vast number of subjects cannot be precisely, and therefore
not properly rendered in symmetrical forms.
Ezra Pound "A Retrospect," in Literary Essays of Ezra Pound, copyright © 1918, 1920, 1935 by Ezra Pound. Reprinted by New Directions Publishing Corporation.